Vanessa MacLellan (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
vanessamac) wrote2013-01-12 08:30 am
vanessamac) wrote2013-01-12 08:30 am
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Perfect by Kaleb Lynn Thomas
My critique group co-member has been posting one of his stories, free, online.
Set in a future time when our planet has changed, information and its dissemination are controlled by De Authoriteit of the Industrial Confederation. Luis and Avinashika find themselves on an adventure thanks to their mutual friend Willem. As their world changes, can they adapt to new circumstances and learn to live, love, and survive in their new environment?
Perfect by Kaleb Lynn Thomas
I really enjoy how Kaleb sticks these characters in this situation, especially Luis, that he just can't control anymore. It's a roller coaster he can't jump off and you really worry about him and feel sorry for him, because based on one knee-jerk decision his entire life has changed. Great stuff.
Set in a future time when our planet has changed, information and its dissemination are controlled by De Authoriteit of the Industrial Confederation. Luis and Avinashika find themselves on an adventure thanks to their mutual friend Willem. As their world changes, can they adapt to new circumstances and learn to live, love, and survive in their new environment?
Perfect by Kaleb Lynn Thomas
I really enjoy how Kaleb sticks these characters in this situation, especially Luis, that he just can't control anymore. It's a roller coaster he can't jump off and you really worry about him and feel sorry for him, because based on one knee-jerk decision his entire life has changed. Great stuff.